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Q2 RHETORICAL ANALYSIS · WRITING GUIDE

The Rhetorical Analysis Body Paragraph

A Step-by-Step Formula, Built from Your Week 6 Slides

AP English Language & Composition Study Guide

Based on Week 6 (Sept. 14–18) RA Writing slides: Queen Elizabeth I, Green, and Phillips sample paragraphs; Q2 scoring notes

Built from: your Week 6 slides (Sept. 14–18), "Quick RA Review," "Writing Practice," "Paragraph Review," "Tips for Improvement," the Queen Elizabeth I, Green, and Phillips sample body paragraphs, and last year's Q2 scoring notes (slides 16–29). How to use this guide: Part 1 gives you the ideas the formula depends on. Part 2 is the formula itself: eight sentences, each with one job. Part 3 takes the class samples apart sentence by sentence so you can see the formula working in real paragraphs. Parts 4–6 cover the mistakes your teacher flagged, what the AP readers reward, and word banks. Part 7 walks one paragraph from blank page to finished draft. Part 8 is practice. The Appendix reprints every class sample paragraph in full, labeled with the formula's pieces. One warning up front, from your own slides: the AP table leaders said to "watch out for formulaic structures." This formula is training wheels. It keeps every link of the chain in place while you learn. Once the chain is automatic, you vary the order and sentence shapes (Part 5 shows how). A paragraph that thinks in this order but doesn't sound like a template is the goal. PART 1: The Three Ideas the Formula Runs On

1.1 Choice vs. technique: the difference that decides your score

Your slides define these two terms separately, and mixing them up is the single biggest reason paragraphs stall. Term What it is Size Example (Queen Elizabeth I at Tilbury)

Rhetorical

choice

The move the writer makes to achieve their purpose.

What the writer is doing.

Big: one per

paragraph

She develops a loyal and trustworthy persona

Rhetorical

technique

The specific, concrete tool that carries out the choice.

It has a label.

Small: one to three

per paragraph

Counterargument, contrast with "ty rants," a

promise to fight beside them

Think of the choice as the strategy and the techniques as the plays that run it. "Uses a metaphor" is a play. "Builds herself up as one of them" is a strategy. Your topic sentence names the strategy. The body shows the plays.

Trap to avoid: writing "Green uses repetition to persuade his audience" as a topic sentence. Repetition is a technique, not a choice, and "to persuade" is not a purpose (every text persuades). The Q2 scoring notes say exactly this: students "relied a lot on naming a device rather than identifying a choice and its impact," and "this scored lower."

1.2 Every choice works through one of three appeals, and the appeal limits the purpose

Your slides: every rhetorical choice changes one of three things.

Appeal What it changes Choices that belong here Purposes it CAN serve

Ethos How the audience

sees the writer

Building a persona, establishing credibility , showing shared

values, conceding a point to seem fair

Build trust, seem relatable, seem qualified, close

a status gap

Pathos How the audience

feels

Appealing to patriotism, faith, pride, fear, grief; vivid

imagery

Inspire, reassure, provoke outrage or sy mpathy ,

push past hesitation

Logos How the audience

thinks

Evidence, examples, comparisons, refuting a

counterargument, cause and effect

Convince, correct a misunderstanding, reframe

how something is understood

The matching rule (slide 19): the purpose you name has to be something that appeal can actually do. A persona (ethos) can change how the soldiers see the Queen. It can't, by itself, prove a logical claim. If your "why" sentence claims a character appeal "logically proves" something, the chain is broken.

1.3 The chain

Slide 21 gives you the paragraph as a chain. Every link has to be there, in this order of logic:

CHOICE → TECHNIQUE(S) → EVIDENCE → EFFECT ON AUDIENCE → CONNECTION TO PURPOSE

Slide 17 asks the same thing as four questions. Your paragraph has to answer all four:

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Question Link in the chain Where it goes

What does the writer do? Choice Topic sentence

Where does the writer do it? Technique + evidence with line numbers Middle sentences

How is it meant to affect the audience? Effect After the evidence

Why does the writer do this? Purpose Closing sentences

If a link is missing, the slide says, "the paragraph will feel incomplete." Most weak paragraphs have the first three links and skip the last two, as if the effect were obvious. The scoring notes say that's exactly where points are lost.

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PART 2: The Formula, Sentence by Sentence

Before you write anything, spend two minutes on the prewrite. Then write eight sentences (seven to nine is normal), each with one job. Step 0: The two-minute prewrite (do this in the margin)

Answer these four lines in fragments. Everything in the paragraph comes from them.

1. Audience + their starting position: Who, specifically, and what do they believe or feel before the text? ("Common soldiers, likely see the Queen as distant and privileged.")

2. The obstacle: What stands between the audience and what the writer wants? ("Huge status gap, and she's asking them to die.") 3. The choice: What move does the writer make to get past that obstacle? ("Makes herself look loyal and trustworthy, one of them.") 4. Two or three quotes that show the choice, with line numbers.

Why the obstacle matters: the obstacle is what lets you explain why the choice was needed. Green's audience resented the government. Phillips's audience had never heard of Louverture. The Queen's soldiers saw her as untouchable. In every class sample, the best commentary is the writer overcoming a specific problem with a specific audience.

Sentence 1: The topic sentence (WHAT + WHY, no context)

Template:

[Writer] [strong verb + the choice] in order to [change in the audience], [optional: who the audience is]. Real example: